Soyala Amaya

I know, I know, blatant thread bump, but somebody critique this! Incan, Hunter, Firestarter...shred please!

Allright, allright, I know, blatant thread bump but...I want so good ciritque! Come on Incan, firestarter, hunter! I kill your pieces all the time! Shred this one!

If you read my blog, you'll kind of get what this is. Damn I hate long distance relationships sometimes. One more night of twitching anticipation, Telling myself that tonight (for ...

I feel so...defined. And like I should shoot myself because my life is shit. Good job! Only thing I got to say is, instead of bolding that last line, put ...

Oh was right...she was being nice. Frankly honey, this does jack for people. You're using hackneyed, cliche, yin and yang analogies that everyone uses all the time when they can't ...

Hi Carmina! Just so you have a little heads up, Incadensence and myself are the crulest people when it comes to critiqueing, so don't feel bad. Both of us just ...

Um...Lordy. Yea, um, all my own critiques were taken by Writersdomain. Just wording things, but...sometimes i don't think i should read poetry by my friends. It's both a beautiful lightning ...

I'm not sure I one hundred percent agree with Incan. True, this is a like hackneyed subject, but the format is over done as well. How many times have you ...

Tessi! Have you returned to us? I do hope so my love. Well, anyway, onto the poem. Over all, I think this was wonderful, the ending was superb, but the ...

*le sigh* Incan...how do you do it? All too often I trip through this site and mob the attempts at poetry with my flock of raven keys till I feel ...

First off...THREAD BUMP! Sheesh, thread bumps piss me off. I'm only going to actually reply to this because I think someone needs too...Bitch much? That's all I get from this. ...

Interesting idea, but I think you made it a little bit too long. Maybe take out a stanza or two and it would be a lot better. But the imagery ...

yay Snoink! Another Spanish poetry buff! And, if you can, go ahead and translate them. I don't know enough Spanish yet to really make it say what I want, so ...

If I could, I would purr. I can speak l337 (leet) with the best of them, almost as fast as I can type regularly, but this is a WRITING site ...

I'm not sure I like it. I mean, just earlier I made a post with my own type of love poems and...this just seems childish to me. You were infatuated, ...